Art Commission: Fate

Hello! Nice work with they watercolors I like how you used the water and let the paint spread into the other colors. Just wondering why "fate" is written there? is that part of the commission? 

Ok here we go...don't worry about the angle, in fact having him straight might have look too stagnant and formal/staged. So that's cool. I would suggest not having so many "muscle" lines? They are making the body look a little lumpy, and you don't need so many - like I would avoid the one in the crotch area Also see where the left side of the chest comes out like a breast area? I think because his arms/wings are raised, the bump would be higher up...in my opinion  

The wings are lovely, I like the way you drew the claws and the structure where it folds etc...Also the face is cool, I like the expression you could leave the horns as they are or you could add pen stripes, cross hatching OR some light shading in gray to contrast the colorful parts...or choose another color. 

Lastly I don't know if you scanned it like that or if its like that in real life...but the feet are cut off it would be cool to have them in to have a more complete image.

Anyways it's a cool painting keep up the good work! I hope my feedback helps a little.